Different Ways
20 September, 2008, 3:39 pm
Filed under: Poetry | Tags: ,

Different Ways

In the block
hand to hand
status spins
into nothing
aching step back
off pressure
Set free

Notes swim out
severed strokes tapped
muted beat
Waves sway
with time
turn away

she returns
Measured steps
strung out on a stave
commands float
at her hemline
salt water whispers
stinging melody


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This really doesn’t work, does it? Well, worth a try.

Comment by Vish

It certainly works. It would be amazing to hear this read aloud in an smokey environment of poetry and wine.

Comment by I. Cant

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