Different Ways
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Different Ways
In the block
hand to hand
status spins
into nothing
aching step back
off pressure
Set free
Notes swim out
oblivious
severed strokes tapped
out
in
muted beat
Waves sway
with time
turn away
Hooked
she returns
Measured steps
strung out on a stave
commands float
at her hemline
salt water whispers
stinging melody
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This really doesn’t work, does it? Well, worth a try.
Comment by Vish 3 October, 2008 @ 8:45 amIt certainly works. It would be amazing to hear this read aloud in an smokey environment of poetry and wine.
Comment by I. Cant 3 October, 2008 @ 12:33 pm